Comments on: Share with me http://www.reasonforliberty.com/poetry/share-with-me.html Because everything has a reason! Sat, 14 Jan 2012 17:52:12 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: samay http://www.reasonforliberty.com/poetry/share-with-me.html#comment-1199 samay Wed, 13 Aug 2008 11:17:22 +0000 http://www.reasonforliberty.com/?p=546#comment-1199 hmm ...it was not meant as a criticism....something in me reacted to it and I just penned it down...and thanks for the reference...it helps putting things in perspective:) hmm …it was not meant as a criticism….something in me reacted to it and I just penned it down…and thanks for the reference…it helps putting things in perspective:)

]]> By: Aravind http://www.reasonforliberty.com/poetry/share-with-me.html#comment-1201 Aravind Tue, 12 Aug 2008 20:00:00 +0000 http://www.reasonforliberty.com/?p=546#comment-1201 That's an awesome poem Plus, I liked the theme and layout. It's stunning. good work. That’s an awesome poem

Plus, I liked the theme and layout. It’s stunning. good work.

]]> By: neha http://www.reasonforliberty.com/poetry/share-with-me.html#comment-1200 neha Tue, 12 Aug 2008 19:26:44 +0000 http://www.reasonforliberty.com/?p=546#comment-1200 i'm so sorry you didn't "liked" my idea of pragmatism or idealism...funny thing is, you almost sound like i was supposed to write to please you!!! anyway...poems are a personal thing don't you think? is it necessary that the "idealist" should behave exactly the way you think they should...i mean, i there any written rule?! i wrote about ONE specific idealist and ONE specific Pragmatic....who may not be the "perfect" picture of either of their categories but i'd still call them that. p.s. <strong>pragmatist</strong> - a person who takes a practical approach to problems and is concerned primarily with the success or failure of her actions <strong>i·de·al·ist (-d-lst)</strong> <em>n.</em> <strong>1. </strong> One whose conduct is influenced by ideals that often conflict with practical considerations. <strong>2. </strong> One who is unrealistic and impractical; a visionary. <strong>3. </strong> An artist or writer whose work is imbued with idealism. <strong>4. </strong> An adherent of any system of philosophical idealism. just incase you need to refer to it :). thanx anyway! i’m so sorry you didn’t “liked” my idea of pragmatism or idealism…funny thing is, you almost sound like i was supposed to write to please you!!!
anyway…poems are a personal thing don’t you think? is it necessary that the “idealist” should behave exactly the way you think they should…i mean, i there any written rule?! i wrote about ONE specific idealist and ONE specific Pragmatic….who may not be the “perfect” picture of either of their categories but i’d still call them that.
p.s. pragmatist – a person who takes a practical approach to problems and is concerned primarily with the success or failure of her actions

i·de·al·ist

(-d-lst)

n.
1. One whose conduct is influenced by ideals that often conflict with practical considerations.
2. One who is unrealistic and impractical; a visionary.
3. An artist or writer whose work is imbued with idealism.
4. An adherent of any system of philosophical idealism.

just incase you need to refer to it :) . thanx anyway!

]]> By: samay http://www.reasonforliberty.com/poetry/share-with-me.html#comment-1198 samay Tue, 12 Aug 2008 19:08:09 +0000 http://www.reasonforliberty.com/?p=546#comment-1198 congratulations...Its really beautiful... :) though poetry can have many interpretations I reply to one that I make of it... It appears to me as a monologue rather than dialogue between the two self's. I guess there has to be a reply too... <strong>Dont Share....just live with me </strong> Dont betray my 'fire' on the name of reason For she is a bloom of different season Though thou have won and my voice slowly subside Let me keep my passion... my fire alive What poisons thee is my elixir of life An untouched joy awaiting ripe Remember my friend if I die so would thou For only dead walk without a shadow... We are nothing but opposites of a coin Can never arrive at the same point What I can see is blinded to thee So don't share ....just live with me poetry is not completely unbiased...which would have been the case had you yourself written the second half ....I have my biases which has come in....but thats the voice I would give to my fire, my second self :) congratulations…Its really beautiful… :)
though poetry can have many interpretations I reply to one that I make of it…
It appears to me as a monologue rather than dialogue between the two self’s. I guess there has to be a reply too…

Dont Share….just live with me

Dont betray my ‘fire’ on the name of reason
For she is a bloom of different season
Though thou have won and my voice slowly subside
Let me keep my passion… my fire alive

What poisons thee is my elixir of life
An untouched joy awaiting ripe
Remember my friend if I die so would thou
For only dead walk without a shadow…

We are nothing but opposites of a coin
Can never arrive at the same point
What I can see is blinded to thee
So don’t share ….just live with me

poetry is not completely unbiased…which would have been the case had you yourself written the second half ….I have my biases which has come in….but thats the voice I would give to my fire, my second self :)

]]> By: mith http://www.reasonforliberty.com/poetry/share-with-me.html#comment-1196 mith Tue, 12 Aug 2008 05:54:35 +0000 http://www.reasonforliberty.com/?p=546#comment-1196 beautiful! 'Share with me, friend of mine’ The beauty and the light, For within each day, Within ourselves, There is untouched joy and life.' love it! :) beautiful!

‘Share with me, friend of mine’
The beauty and the light,
For within each day,
Within ourselves,
There is untouched joy and life.’

love it! :)

]]> By: stuntman mike http://www.reasonforliberty.com/poetry/share-with-me.html#comment-1197 stuntman mike Tue, 12 Aug 2008 05:48:54 +0000 http://www.reasonforliberty.com/?p=546#comment-1197 Share with me, friend of mine’ The pain of pleasures poison, it seems no invitation can sound more honest ... Share with me, friend of mine’
The pain of pleasures poison,

it seems no invitation can sound more honest …

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